莹老师点评： 这应该是小霖最真实、最迫切的心愿了——多睡两个小时。今天恰逢世界睡眠日，这个素材真是太契合了。小霖从切身经历描述了缺乏睡眠的孩子在课堂上的表现，同时发出迫切地呼吁：希望孩子们能有充足的睡眠，从而提高学习效率。情感真挚，令人感同身受。 不过有些语言表达还是不够精准，要好好体会老师的修改哦。 我的心愿（五年级 小霖） 搏击长空，是鹰的心愿；春华秋实，是树的心愿；漫山遍野，是花的心愿；五谷...
1、《我永远的天空》作文600字 从呱呱落地的那一刻起;从发出第一声哭声起;从会喊“妈妈”起，命中注定我和我的母亲要相遇。 我上幼儿园了，每天都快乐地和同龄伙伴在一起玩耍，每天都沉浸在快乐之中，童年时期的我，是无忧无虑的。而母亲，只是在一旁观看我的身影。 我上小学了，面对着每天堆积如山的作业，我不再快乐，每天就是吃饭，睡觉，写作业，人也变得很呆板。每每看见...
My Classroom My classroom is nice and big . There are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too. My classroom has eleven lights ...
自我介绍 Everybody is good, my name is called He xuan, my English name is called Angle. Everybody knew that Angle is the angel meaning, I hoped that I forever can look like the angel equally happily, joyf...
Last Weekend I had a happy weekend last week. On Saturday morning, I watched TV and helped my mother wash clothes. In the afternoon, I cleaned three bedrooms in my house-- mine, my parents' and my bro...
我的妈妈 My mother is a senior high school English teacher. Under standably， she wanted her daughter to pick up English early to give her an edge to later study， which I did not understand at the age of e...
最有趣的事 To me ,the most interesting subject is English.But I find studying English is very difficult.So if you ask which subject is the most difficult to me.My answer will be English.Now I am a student,...
交通安全 With the development of the modern technology，private car is no longer a luxurious thing for ordinary people，more and more people drive to work instead of going by bus. The popularization of priv...
开学见闻 It's the first day of school once again. Stepping into the gate of the school always reminds me of the responsibility I carry as a student. Being a student is not just about attending classes and...
Myself Hi!I am a happy and quiet girl.I am from China.I am twelve years old,I am a pupil,I am in Class Three Gread Four.I many good friends.I like many pet,the peacock panda rabbit and bird,they are l...
我们去玩足球 Afrer a whole day's hard studing, I fell very tierd and want to go out to play football for fan. But my teachers always say that it takes too much time and can make us away from studing.So they...
The Colour of Autumn Autumn comes , it gets cooler and cooler. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. You would say autumn is blue and white. Look ! Birds are flying from the north to the south. Th...
My Teacher's House My English teacher has a big house. It has a living room, a big dining room, two bedrooms, a study, two bathrooms and a big kitchen. In the living room, there is a big picture, four...
What is family ? Everybody has his own family. What is family? I don't think everyone really knows. There are six letters in the word “ FAMILY ”。 I think “ F ” means “father”， “A” means “and”， “ M ”...
Spring Rain Spring comes.lt'sgetting warmer and warmer.Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air. Just then, it rains. lt's as soft as silk. lt washes the dirty of the earth and waters the pla...
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