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考试真题
The best way to reduce youth crime is to teach parents to have good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
题目分析
●本次考试的题目属于法律秩序类话题，犯罪类话题考试频率不高，但是每次出现都让考生十分头疼，因为对这个话题接触少所以觉得很难下笔，但总结来看，这类话题的考查范围固定且比较有限，掌握好这个范围内的东西，无论何时出现都能做到下笔如有神。
●范文开头段介绍背景，改写题目后提出个人倾向。
●主体段分为两个段落，第一段分析父母和家庭的责任；第二段探讨社会和政府应该承担的责任。
●结尾段总结全文强调主题。
范文示例
Introduction
Background sentence
It is generally considered that the major responsibility of juvenile offenders (青少年罪犯) should be undertaken (承担) by their parents.
Rephrase the topic
In this sense, improving parents’ability in educating their children is regarded by many people as an effective method (有效方法) to prevent this phenomenon (防止这种现象).
Attitude or personal opinion
From my point of view, not only parents but also the government and society should be responsible for (对…负责) the rising crime rates (犯罪率的上升) among the young.
译文
背景句
一般认为，青少年罪犯的主要责任应该由他们的父母承担。
改写题目
从这个意义上说，提高父母教育孩子的能力被许多人认为是防止这种现象的有效方法。
立场或个人观点
在我看来，不仅是父母，政府和社会也应该对青少年犯罪率的上升负责。
Body paragraph 1
Idea
There is no doubt, firstly, family hold an unescapable responsibility for (承担着不可推卸的责任) their children’s behaviour.
Reason (Why)
It often goes that parents are a child’s first teachers.
Explain (Example)
Apparently, parents have a profound impact on (产生重大影响) their children’s actions.
Detail (Result of the example)
The clear majority of young criminals (绝大多数年轻罪犯) in western nations are from low income households (低收入家庭), where parents are struggling to make ends meet (维持生计) so that they have little time to give support and attention to their children.
Conclusion
Thus, it is vital to build up parents’skills and reduce living burden on them in raising a child (抚养孩子).
译文
观点
首先，毫无疑问的是，父母对孩子的行为承担着不可推卸的责任。
解释观点 (理由)
通常来说，父母是孩子的第一任老师。
进一步解释或例子
显然，父母对孩子的行为有很大的影响。
细节或例子的结果
在西方国家，绝大多数年轻罪犯都来自低收入家庭，他们的父母努力维持生计，几乎没有时间来支持和照顾他们的孩子。
结论
因此，培养父母的技能，减轻抚养孩子的生活负担是至关重要的。
Body paragraph 2
Idea
On the other hand, the government and society are also accountable for (负责任) teenager crimes.
Reason (Why)
If a country can provide adequate social insurance (足够的社会保险) and stable society, the crime rate will definitely be in control.
Explain (Example)
In the United States, for example, there has been an alarming increase (惊人的增长) in gun-related crime (枪支犯罪率) across all age demographics (所有年龄段).
Conclusion
It is clear that the two key factors involved in this are economic hardship (经济困难) and America’s excessively permissive gun legislation (过于宽松的枪支立法).
译文
观点
另一方面，政府和社会的责任同样不可忽视。
解释观点 (理由)
如果一个国家能够提供足够的社会保险和稳定的社会，犯罪率一定会得到控制。
进一步解释或例子
例如，在美国，所有年龄段的枪支犯罪率都有惊人的增长。
结论
很明显，这一现象涉及的两个关键因素就是经济困难和美国过于宽松的枪支立法。
Conclusion
Main idea of the essay
While parents training surely plays an important role in cutting teenager crime, this does not mean that the government and society should be dismissed as (被视为) dispensable (adj. 可有可无的).
Suggestion
I would advocate (v. 提倡) socially inclusive economic policies (社会包容性的经济政策) aimed at offering young people a genuine stake (真正的支持) in their society as a solution to reduce juvenile delinquency (减少青少年犯罪).
译文
主要观点总结
虽然家长培训在减少青少年犯罪方面确实起着重要的作用，但这并不意味着政府和社会是可有可无的。
建议
我提倡具有社会包容性的经济政策，经济政策应旨在向年轻人提供真正的支持，并以此作为减少青少年犯罪的解决方案。
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词汇积累
juvenile offenders
青少年罪犯
undertaken
v. 承担
an effective method
有效方法
prevent this phenomenon
防止这种现象
be responsible for
对…负责
the rising crime rates
犯罪率的上升
hold an unescapable responsibility for
承担着不可推卸的责任
have a profound impact on
产生重大影响
the clear majority of young criminals
绝大多数年轻罪犯
low income households
低收入家庭
make ends meet
维持生计
raising a child
抚养孩子
are also accountable for
负责任
adequate social insurance
足够的社会保险
an alarming increase
惊人的增长
gun-related crime
枪支犯罪率
across all age demographics
所有年龄段
economic hardship
经济困难
excessively permissive gun legislation
过于宽松的枪支立法
be dismissed as
被视为
dispensable
adj. 可有可无的
advocate
v. 提倡
socially inclusive economic policies
社会包容性的经济政策
a genuine stake
真正的支持
reduce juvenile delinquency
减少青少年犯罪
