写作任务
假设你是林彤,这个周末(9月23日、24日)你和David一起游览了绍兴。请你根据下列提示内容,在旅行结束当晚写一篇日记,记录这次旅行。
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点,可适当发挥,但不要逐字翻译;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚;
3. 不少于90词。
参考词汇:
素斋 vegetarian food
写作思路与分析
本篇习作要求学生写一篇游记。
首先,我们先来了解一下日记的格式。
英文日记通常由两部分组成,即书端和正文。
● 书端用于记录日记的日期、星期和天气情况。日期和星期写在左上角,天气情况写在右上角。天气情况一般用一个形容词来说明,如:Sunny, Rainy, Snowy。
● 正文:正文内容要求我们写一篇记叙文,记录自己的游览经历以及感受。游记的正文内容通常包括:时间、地点、人物、旅游行程以及你的感受。
具体到本篇习作,可按照以下结构来写:
词汇储备
★你可能会用到的形容词:
interesting, boring, wonderful, exciting, relaxing, enjoyable, excellent
★你可能会用到的其他词汇:
take a trip, be known as, be famous for, arrive at / in, places of interest, enjoy oneself, go sightseeing
句型荟萃
★开头部分:
1. I had a trip with…
2. I went to…with…to spend …
3. I had a great weekend with…in…
4. I spent…with…
5. Can you guess where I spent…? I went to…
★主体部分:
1. On our arriving at …, we were all filled with excitement.
2. It is famous for…
3. I started my trip in….
4. As soon as we arrived at…, we started our visit.
5. On the first (second, third…) day, we went to / visited / walked around…
6. We tried / tasted …
7. We spent lots of time in …
8. We visited many places there, including …
9. It is in the shape of…
10. After that, we went to visit…
11. We moved on and stopped at…
12. My final stop was…
★结尾部分:
1. What an unforgettable trip!
2. I look forward to visiting … next year.
3. … left a deep impression on me.
4. All in all, it was a very enjoyable stay.
5. I had a great time / fun …
6. This trip is one of the best experiences of my life!
7. I was sad to say goodbye to this great place. It’s really worth visiting.
8. The trip is both relaxing and meaningful. So we all expect for our next coming.