2022年6月第 一套
Directions: Suppose you are going to write a proposal to your school clinic for improving its service. You are to write about its current problems and possible solutions to these problems. You will have 30 minutes to write the proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
审题引导
本次四级作文题目考查应用文写作，要求向校医院提出关于提升服务水平的意见和建议。 写作内容可以首先指明问题所在，随后给出相应的解决方案。因为题干要求是给校医院写一 份提议，属于信件类型，所以考生要严格按照信件的格式进行书写，包含抬头和落款。
写作提纲
第 一段：首先对校医院的服务表示肯定，随后指出也存在一些问题需要解决。
第二段：阐述具体问题，并给出一定的解决建议。
第三段：期待校医院能够对这份提议予以重视和采用。
必 备词汇
medical [ˈmedɪk(ə)l] a.医学的
orientation [ˌɔːriənˈteɪʃ(ə)n] n. 目标，定位
locate [ləʊˈkeɪt] v.确定……的位置
seminar [ˈsemɪnɑː(r)] n.研讨会，培训会
riveting [ˈrɪvɪtɪŋ] a.吸引人的
need to be addressed 需要解决
guide sb. in doing sth. 指引某人做某事
TCM abbr. 中医(traditional Chinese medicine)
issue [ˈɪʃuː] n.议题，问题，争论点
layout [ˈleɪaʊt] n.布局
organize [ˈɔːɡənaɪz] v.组织；规划
meditation [ˌmedɪˈteɪʃn] n.冥想；沉思
abovementioned [ə ˈbʌvˌmenʃənd] a.上述的
in light of… 鉴于……
lead a healthy life 过健康的生活
be taken into consideration 纳入考虑范围
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I, like many other students in our university, am grateful for the medical service provided by our school clinic. Nevertheless, there are some issues that need to be addressed.
Firstly, it is about the orientation. As for now, it is a bit confusing when it comes to the location of each medical department, so it would be of great assistance if a more detailed layout of the clinic could be put up on each floor, thus we can quickly find the right place. It is believed that the best cure for diseases is prevention. In light of this, the clinic can organize regular health seminars to guide college students in leading a healthy life. Riveting themes like TCM, diet and meditation would likely be welcomed by us students.
I hope the abovementioned suggestions can be taken into consideration, and the clinic can become a better guard for students ’ fitness and health.
With regards,
Li Ming
作文模板
Dear Sir/Madam,
I, like many other students in our university, am grateful for . Nevertheless, there are some issues that need to be addressed.
Firstly, it is about . As for now, it is a bit confusing when it comes to , so it would be of great assistance if , thus we can quickly . It is believed that . In light of this, can organize to . Riveting themes like would be likely to be welcomed by us students.
I hope the abovementioned suggestions can be taken into consideration, and can become a better .
With regards,
Li Ming
