Part ⅠWriting
【审题提纲】
本次考试以书信体的形式考查了对父母家人、老师以及朋友的感恩。题目类型很出人意料，但实际上还是历年真题的再现。早在2014年12月份的时候，四级写作就曾考查过《使你受益最深的一次校园活动》等一系列的夹叙夹议的题目，这次只不过是在其基础上，要求以书信体的形式来表现而已。以本文来说，试题着重考查了我们应该就一次具有纪念意义的成就来表达我们对家人的感恩之情。因为是书信体，需要在正文的前面加上称呼，同时在末尾加上结束语，落款和署名。但因为是私人信函，不用表明身份。
第一段： 表明写信目的，说明这件成就是什么。
第二段： 阐述感谢原因。说明这项成就对我的影响，继而点明父母的帮助对我的影响。
第三段： 再次表达感谢，并可阐述希望有机会可以给予父母回报。
【参考范文】
Dear dad and mom,
I would like to thank both of you for these years’ care and help, especially in a memorable achievement that I participated in the National Translation Contest in 2015.
This contest taught me how to make a good plan for my future, firm my belief and become optimistic and positive. Why would I say so? Three reasons could contribute to this. To begin with, facing the great competitors, I was for a time unable to look at myself correctly and objectively. It was you who encouraged me to face up difficulties instead of envying others all the time . What’s more, when I was about to give up, it was you who gave me the relevant books and suggestions to combat this battle. Additionally, when I succeeded in accomplish this task, it was you who instructed me that this contest is a process of one’s endeavor rather than the end of the world.
My appreciation to you is beyond words. I wish I could have the opportunity to repay you for your kindness.
Lovely Yours,
Li Ming
【写作模板】
Dear ,______
I would like to thank (感谢对象) for (感谢原因), especially in (关键词).
This (关键词) taught me (关键词产生的意义). Why would I say so? Three reasons could contribute to this. To begin with, (面对困境一时). It was you who (用强调句说明对方给予的具体帮助). What’s more, (面对困境二时，用强调句说明对方给予的具体帮助). Additionally, when I succeeded in accomplish (面对成就时), It was you who (用强调句说明对方给予的教诲).
My appreciation to you is beyond words. I wish I could have the opportunity to repay you for your kindness.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
